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[绿意盎然] 【美母的堕落回忆录】(01)(绿母,调教,不重口)

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其实还是用第三人称描述起来会更有代入感,很多细节也可以用更多的笔墨去描写和叙述。第一人称在和多时候确实有很大的局限性,很难做到让读者们有一种身临其境 感同身受的感觉。但是楼主大大是否可以尝试偶尔也带如一点第一人称的视角呢?
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